PNEAT 2nd Level ― Short Essay Writing

The following chart shows the advantages and disadvantages of going to live performances. After choosing a side, write an introduction and come up with a third reason. Then, write about all three reasons and make a conclusion. (80 ― 120 words)

Advantages

- experience history
- much better quality
- _________________________

Disadvantages

- not comfortable
- cost lots of money
- _______________________________

In my opinion, I would rather go to live performances than watch them on television. First of all, if I go to a live performance, I can experience history. That is because many amazing and exciting things happen at concerts and if I see them live and I can be very proud. Second, everything has much better quality when you see it in person. For example, music sounds much better at a concert than hearing it through speakers at your home. Third, going to live performances is a great way to bond with friends and family. Although it may take a long time, you will always have those memories of waiting in line and watching your favorite singer. To conclude, I think that it is better to go to live performances.

In my opinion, I would watch performances on television than go to them. First of all, watching something live is not comfortable. I have to wait in long lines and stand throughout the entire show. However, at home I can watch it while sitting on the sofa. Second, going to live performances is too expensive. On average, it costs about $100 to go to a music concert. That is too expensive for most students. Third, going to live performances can take a very long time. Sometimes, concerts are very far away or you have to wait in really long lines. To conclude, I think that it is better to watch live performances on television.